Rain Day
last Monday in 8 of September we had her in Tempe rainstorm. It started from 2 am until like 10 am and it didn't stop . I waked up at 2:30 because of the sound thunder and I saw the lightning it like in my room flashed white in the dark. It was little scared, but at 3:15am I want back to sleep. when the alarm rang at 6:15 I waked and it was dark it. I thought that the I set the alarm in wrong time ,but after 10 minutes my friend knocked my door told me wake we have class. I waked fast to go to the class. It ran a lot and we didn't have umbrella . we needed to took the light rail the I walked for 10 minutes to the class it was rain and hard to walk without umbrella. I entered to the class at 7 am Ms. Carol was there I was wet and the class was cold. When I want back home I felt sick . Also in the news they talked that a lot of car stacked in the road.
Hamad,
ReplyDeletePlease change your verbs to the past tense. Rewrite the paragraph and I will give you full mark. Now I can only give you 10/20 because of so many grammar mistakes.